I liked the way you made the person. Did you know I like the sun and the moon go up together? Next time, you could add talking to your awesome slide. Why did you make this cool slide?
Hey Sophia Its me Tayla from Marshland school I really like the animation and the people looked really cute! Next time you could maybe make your own backround of hell and heaven But over all it's really good
Hello Sophia, it is me, your Mum from home. I love your slide, it looks as though it took a lot of time and patience to create. I am pleased to see your quirky sense of humour come through in this. What inspired your choice of story line? Will there be a part two?
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I liked the way you made the person.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like the sun and the moon go up together?
Next time, you could add talking to your awesome slide.
Why did you make this cool slide?
Hey Sophia
ReplyDeleteIts me Tayla from Marshland school
I really like the animation and the people looked really cute!
Next time you could maybe make your own backround of hell and heaven
But over all it's really good
Hello Sophia R I am Susana from Red Hill School I think you should of put a tittle also I really like your google slides Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHello Sophia, it is me, your Mum from home.
ReplyDeleteI love your slide, it looks as though it took a lot of time and patience to create. I am pleased to see your quirky sense of humour come through in this.
What inspired your choice of story line? Will there be a part two?